that was amazing. i started reading, not knowing what to expect, but this is almost novel-like. usually you here that novels are almost poem-like, but this is quite an excellent example of the reverse.

i'd be interested in reading some novels from you, though, i wish these characters were developed over chapters and chapters...i feel as if i could fall in love with them.

thanks for the review! i'll try to update as soon as possible (being winter break, that may be possible for once). come back soon!