CUTE BUT CORNY

You know, I actually DID google White Lighter, and got this:

Sorry if that doesn't show up on the review...

Great play, and very original. Faved again, you lucky dog.

Your stories are so randomly hilarious.

I love it!

FAVORITE.

You should have a don't-try-this-at-home warning at the beginning of this story because I'm just waiting to get my hands on someone else's lighter! I like this story and it seems to be developing well.

m, goodness. Brava, good stuff.

Cute, and it's true, I'm the rainbow, my boys are always so black and white. I even have a friend who's so colorblind he can only see black, white and shades of gray...haha...Oh well, this is cute, I like it.

Gaki

Another great short story. I hade a big smile on my face when I was reading this one. It reminds me and my girlfriend, just the way they talk to one another, and I am the black lighter in the relationship, she has the damn rainbows. Keep it up.

i enjoyed this story as a dialogue, however, it would be really great as a short story. you could cut a lot of the "filler" stuff and supply more setting and characterization. i would love to read that!