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| mariao_0 2008-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseok tis story got me VERY interested and i'm agreing w/ every1 but come on hury up and put up the second chap!! its driving me crazy!! |
| Enaid 2007-12-29 ch 1,  | abuseahh but who is ayla summer... tbc hopefully soon lol sounds good but slightly cliche which is good cause i like cliches lol. cant wait for the nxt update |
| SapphireEyes16 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseluv the idea of this story, keep updating! |
| glamoureste 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseNO! WHAT THE FUCCK! AH! you haven't updated in over a YEAR! well, kinda... but omg. Please, please continue with this story!! it sounds SO good. |
| KelseyBell910 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseTHIS SOUNDS GOOD! =] YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE! =] |
| effervescent-sentiments 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. There are a few grammatical errors, but those can be fixed with just a quick edit. Please update soon, I'm intrigued! Devione. |
| ess3sandra 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abusegirl, i like this, tripplets? that really is new, go for it! |
| Shake Hips Not Fists 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThis seems interesting and I'm looking forward to your updates. :) |
| Jool 2007-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI check frequently for an update to this wonderful idea. Please continue this potentially great story. Waiting patiently. I'm so curious about Ayla. Please continue soon. Thanks Jool |
| Miami-Lu 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseThis one sounds really good! I already enjoyed the first chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope to see it soon! |
| Indypigen2 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseWow! Really interesting ^_^ Please update soon! |
| DuchessYappingDog 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseOh oh oh? Who is this? xD I can't wait to read more! I'm rooting for Cameron. I hope he's not the silent and mysterious type... who turns out to be the rapist type... like in Oil and Water, Cats and Dogs. xD |
| Chiclets 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOkay, you've got me intrigued. Who is this Ayla Summer that it can make Xander have such a reaction? (Lol...I would have switched Cam and Xander's names around...the personalities of Cam seem suited more to the name Xander, and vice versa...but my opinion, and I'm not saying you should change anything at all.) I like the story thus far. Good job. |
| Sheilz and Friendz 2006-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abusegod storylove da titlealex sounds lyk u butkeep at iti wanna know who alya summers is ciao bella |
| FireBad.TreePretty 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseme gusta hahaah =} |