this is pretty shocking. in such a good way. sometimes a jolt is good for a body.

i liked this...good portrayal of raw emotion in this piece. nicely done

cause as long as your eyes
are on the sky
i can kid myself
about where your hand is.


...wow.

"and so,/boy,/you better look up/right about now." hah. i love that.

-aly

"i can kid myself about where your hand is." the irony that jangles through this makes it even more charming.

you know, i've lived this.

it's the way good girls want bad boys-bad girls want good boys (or girls) because something about innocence...makes you ache.

i really liked this.

Once again: happy birthday my lovely Jen.