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| Travis C. Eckert 2006-11-12 ch 4,   | Didn't stick out to me to be as good as the others, but I still see why a person would enjoy it, not exactly my taste. |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-11-12 ch 3, | Another good one, and thanks for the earlier reviews. |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-11-12 ch 2, | I absoutely love this, such beautiful description. |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 60, | Alistar- I wonder who's viewpoint this was written from. It seemed a yyoung person, inexperienced and alone. |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 59, | Ohh, that dang review throttle... I know how the narrarator feels, especially mean/ funny one. I think we've all done that before... |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 58, | Alistar- "The rejected crayon snapped in half." Loving that line will become one of my new hobbies, other than leading Garren's Trial mercenary group. |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 57, | Good point. I always wonder why people use the words, "Uh, everyone's doing it." Never true. |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 56, | Good rhythm for this... this one really makes me think a lot. |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 55, | I don't know, who are all these pronouns! Ah! I always wonder who people mean when they go, "Well, Tom, you know what they say." |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 54, | Alistar- Ohh, this has a very good rythm, very good adjectives as well describing their thoughts. |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 51, | By the way, some of my following reviews will be from Alistar, one of main characters in Mercenary. She has spare time. Alistar- Excellent job repressenting the person's state of mind, rather unstable... Good moral, if you will, that the strong-willed are the trully strong. |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 15, | Effective, this was. Good, this was. One thing, change last line slightly, I would. Good anyhow, though. |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 14, | Once again, I get to review Dragon's Delight. This is probably my favorite of your poems, so thanks for writing it! |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-12 ch 72, | Cool, a descriptive poem! This one was interesting to read, and I liked the last line. |
| Heatless Flame 2006-11-09 ch 32, | Perhaps something inbetween... a maple? Good comparison, another proverb for us all. By thway, congratulations, this is my 200th signed review! *Thunderous applause* |