Reviews for If Not Now, Then Soon

Katherine Willow 2006-10-11 ch 1,	First, thank you so much for your kind review of my one-shot. Secondly, I really like your writing style. It definitely has the tone that I also try to employ. I think that you could probably expand these feelings into a longer piece--the character has potential for development. She's raw and angry and sad and a liar, but you've got a good way of justifying such. I think you could expand this and create really intense story line. Anyway, thanks! I appreciate the R/R.
M.D.Irvine 2006-09-30 ch 1,	really emotional. she lies for them to break up. it actually reminds me of another fic i just reviewed Chris by Hidden Depths just it was a guy doing the same thing. great job
Frore 2006-09-26 ch 1,	Great story! Very descriptive and dark, and you find yourself being wrenched out of your seat when you read that she's making up a lie just to break up with him ... A lof of emotional upheaval. It's hard to find short stories that pull this off well. Nice work!