Fabulous! (only critique is: did you mean "seems" or "seams?") This sort of made me think of a poem a dear friend of mine wrote-- or maybe a combination of a few of his, because of the "question without an answer" and the "unraveling." Anyway, his penname on here is D.Vier, if you care to go look. (

But this message... so clear, so simple, so concisely stated. I positively LOVE it! You go, girl! Truly, Tourterelle (a happy day because... f/p got its bot FIXED!)