A nice poem, with good humor. Some parts could use a little cleaning, though. In the middle, the words get a bit muddled and it's hard to tell who's speaking and/or narrating. The beginning and end were great.

Your rhyming and beat flowed well as a general overview. Each stanza is a treat. Job well done!

wonderful wonderful wonderful!! thats one of the best poems Ive read, Its funny and entertainng, loved reading this!! keep it up!