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| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-27 ch 1,   | Wow. Amazing, and complex and kind of scary. I loved this. |
| KittenX 2007-01-04 ch 1, | Wow, that left me speechless. The imagery is so subtle, yet so painful. There were so many powerful lines. I can't pick out one that stands out, the whole piece stands out. |
| not sure yet 2006-11-28 ch 1, | hm, i enjoyed the mozart reference, very pretty beginning lines too, nicely written little poem here |
| simpleplan13 2006-11-11 ch 1, | I REALLY like the third stanza... great job.. well done |
| poetic abortion 2006-11-10 ch 1, | [favs] &Iloveyouforwritingthis. - Noelle |
| teh tarik 2006-10-26 ch 1, | *his fingers in my throat* i'm just speechless - i loved this to bits. faves. |
| the naked civil servant 2006-10-25 ch 1, | AH! god, the flashbacks this induced. only... you are only... the MIRROR or eveything, darling, only that, only catastrophically and heartbreakingly talented, wonderous, at just capturing those - MOMENTS... jesus. your hands, your hands on me. |
| B. M. Reed 2006-10-20 ch 1, | This was absolutely amazing. |
| flaming.footprints 2006-10-12 ch 1, | Speechless. Your imagery punctured my lungs and it's absolutely breathtaking. You're uber ultra super talented, believe that **. ~Shavo~ |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-10-08 ch 1, | Wonderful imagery, great piece. |
| bread and circuses 2006-10-05 ch 1, | Well, I have no idea but I like it. The imagery and tone is fantastic. |
| Aquafied 2006-10-04 ch 1, | come come and die |
| citrus scented 2006-10-02 ch 1, | based on the film per chance? this.is.mindblowing. the mangled eye sockets just slaps you, and taints the piece...its so well put and thought out. "taut, body stretched like bubble gumpoppedand sticking"...WOW. this is just a truely terrific similee, it really blows me away. and the " your hands, your hands on...me" its all just.amazing.wow. and "his fingers in my throat" so raw, so hurtful. and "last word" such a sense of doom. this is wonderful. truly. |
| classic violet 2006-10-01 ch 1, | just totally amazing.wow. oh god... i LOVE it! |
| dollface and her cancer 2006-09-27 ch 1, | "i remember the last word / (mozart) / like hard candy -" i think i read that, then reread the poem backwards, and it's a bit like falling through a rabbithole. i am puzzled and mesmerized by it and it makes me dizzy in a lovely way. |