i love this so much.
my favorite stanza is the first one.
such amazing imagery in this.
awesome :)

Wow. Amazing, and complex and kind of scary. I loved this.

Wow, that left me speechless. The imagery is so subtle, yet so painful. There were so many powerful lines. I can't pick out one that stands out, the whole piece stands out.

hm, i enjoyed the mozart reference, very pretty beginning lines too, nicely written little poem here

I REALLY like the third stanza... great job.. well done

[favs]

&Iloveyouforwritingthis.

- Noelle

*his fingers in my throat*

i'm just speechless - i loved this to bits. faves.

AH! god, the flashbacks this induced. only... you are only... the MIRROR or eveything, darling, only that, only catastrophically and heartbreakingly talented, wonderous, at just capturing those - MOMENTS... jesus.




your hands, your hands on




me.

This was absolutely amazing.

Speechless. Your imagery punctured my lungs and it's absolutely breathtaking. You're uber ultra super talented, believe that shit.

~Shavo~

Wonderful imagery, great piece.

Well, I have no idea but I like it. The imagery and tone is fantastic.

come come and die

based on the film per chance?

this.is.mindblowing. the mangled eye sockets just slaps you, and taints the piece...its so well put and thought out.

"taut, body stretched like bubble gumpoppedand sticking"...WOW. this is just a truely terrific similee, it really blows me away.

and the " your hands, your hands on...me" its all just.amazing.wow.

and "his fingers in my throat" so raw, so hurtful. and "last word" such a sense of doom. this is wonderful. truly.

just totally amazing.wow. oh god... i LOVE it!