Wow. I really liked that. It makes you feel really nice that they love each other so much. Also, that he didn't necessarily die in the end. I totally thought that he would. This is really good, I quite like it. Well done!

You're going to make me cry, Mellon-Nin. And I cannot possibly guess where the inspiration comes from for this.. hah.

I love it. Amazing. Like always, Kudos :-) !

This feels like a "period" piece. I enjoyed it very much. There's a couple of spots where it felt like a limerick coming on.

This is an absolutely beautiful poem. And it's so sad...