Yeah Bleach is VERY cliche, but it seems to be a normal anime and other animes seem to try to stretch it to the point of no return. Bleach may be generic but at least it can't be as redundant as something like Inuyasha, and can't be as out of the ordinary as Bobobobobobobo. Two animes that I'm extremely fond of are Hellsing and Paranoia Agent. One anime that I can truly say that I hate is Azumanga Diaoh, but anyways, to the review of the story, sounds like something from Silent Hill from the start, but you end up making the story your own. That kid is immortal... in my heart. Just kidding, but good work, anymore of this story I haven't read?

You know...this is probably the first villan i've seen of FP that i can actually label as truly evil. Its a great psychosis piece, without a doubt. It made my stomach actually do flips.

Actually, to be honest the way i found this story was through Max Krugman and his 'reviews'. Assholes like that need to get kicked off FP, they just ruin it for everyone.

Great story man! Keep making more

WHE! That. Was. PSYCHOTIC. *favs* So, this Mr. Stakes... He sounds like a wonderfully gruesome character! And poor Salmon... -ebil giggling- Excellent work! Definitely awesome!