it seems a song, I like the rhyme from the starting :) sweet n heartbroken,

This was so sad :(

but it was written well

hmm, this is a nice, strong poem. But maybe you should have read through this a bit more. Sometimes you miss out on the commas, and you sometimes write the words 'you're, you'll' into just 'you'.

Good poem though. It could have been stronger if all the easy mistakes could have been corrected.

This is really beautifully written d:)

Wow. That girl is strong. I liked the ending. In most poems or stories or whatever, the guy would apoligize to the gal fifteen thousand times... and they'd live happily ever after. This is so much more realistic.

Hey! I like this poem, it's really good. This is SavannahX, by the way, I just changed my username. ;) Great job put up more poems soon!