Reviews for You're gone forever

misery sister 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abusehmm, this is a nice, strong poem. But maybe you should have read through this a bit more. Sometimes you miss out on the commas, and you sometimes write the words 'you're, you'll' into just 'you'. Good poem though. It could have been stronger if all the easy mistakes could have been corrected.
Artemis Anderson 2007-10-15 ch 1,	abuseThis is really beautifully written d:)
R. A. Faith 2006-09-27 ch 1,	abuseWow. That girl is strong. I liked the ending. In most poems or stories or whatever, the guy would apoligize to the gal fifteen thousand times... and they'd live happily ever after. This is so much more realistic.
SavannahX 2006-09-26 ch 1,	abuseHey! I like this poem, it's really good. This is SavannahX, by the way, I just changed my username. ;) Great job put up more poems soon!