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shades.of.crimson
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseHoly smokes, lady - please tell me I got the that right; your profile doesn't explicitly say that you're of the gender variety: boobs - but I think I might be in love. You're freakin' amazing~!

Authors with ten thousand pieces of fiction aren't really my thing, but you got me addicted. And while we're talking about the fact that you've got 55 stories [!!], this is a general review. Because even though I'm raping your stories, I'm too darn lazy to review them all. x)

Whether it's some twisted oneshot or a genuinely soft and huggable chapter-story, you've mastered them all. Your style is the awesome-ness, and your titles kick some serious butt.

So thank you for all the effort you put in; I, for one, am loving it all, and looking forward to more.
neongoldtooth
2006-12-30
ch 5,
abusei love this story, poor patrick.
can't wait to read more!
BrokenDreamz-EmptySoulz
2006-12-01
ch 5,
abuseUpdate this soon! I'm excited to know what will happened to Patrick.
Esquirella
2006-11-21
ch 5,
abuseSo we still don't know who spread the rumor?
Skyrockets
2006-10-25
ch 4,
abuseThis chapter was so full of witty lines. Once again, you've provided me with the first chuckles of my day. If you're not careful, you're going to make people jealous!
And I'd like to take this time to point out what I should have long ago - I love Mr. Weston! He's awesome. And I love what he's doing to Patrick. It's definitly providing for a great monologue on his point.
"That’s like a **, without the blow and the job." - That's my favorite line. Maybe someday I will steal it from you and use it in everday conversation to appear smart and funny...of course it's not really stealing, because now you know, but whatever. It's a great line. It really cracked me up.
And the ending line was great too. Can't wait for more!
Esquirella
2006-10-23
ch 4,
abuseDream sequence? And then the gaggle really surrounds him? And then you end it like a cliffie? If I did that my readers would flog me! Not to worry though, I'm a patient, non-confrontational sort. *grin*
Gaki Toki
2006-10-21
ch 4,
abuseWow...they are so gay...and I love the vicioust ladies at the table, damn they're mean. Anyways, I have a Homecoming dance to attend about an hour from now but I'll still give the time to give you a review. I thought it was a little unrealistic but I think Mr. Weston is really on the offensive here...let's see some good ol' office fantasy boy lovin'! Haha...okay, I'm a sick and twisted individual, but hey, what can I say? I'm a boy lover who just happens to like seeing two boys kissing and getting cuddly and romantic...that's why I tend to dislike certain bi guys who hit on me...DON'T HIT ON ME! Hit on my exboyfriend (HOT!).

I like how you make it like his actual thoughts, thoughts of the average person are not complete, they are fleeting and very informal, and that's why I like how you portrayed them as if you were actually thinking them at the time. It's a gift to know how your characters thinks that well to write it in first person like this. Some people would say it's poor literary skills, I think I see it differently.

My random thought while reading this chapter: Patrick SO has a hard-on.

Gaki
BrokenDreamz-EmptySoulz
2006-10-12
ch 3,
abuseGreg is just so... suportive! I love him. Anyway, whats catch a little shuteye?
Gaki Toki
2006-10-12
ch 3,
abusePatrick is an odd name for a black guy, I hope you realize this...but I like it anyways, and I love black guys...they're so hot sometimes, we actually had a nice pic of one in a friend's locker once and we'd all drool over it. Haha...^_^ We're such GIRLS! Oh well, I like the way you tell the story.

Gaki
Esquirella
2006-10-12
ch 3,
abuseThis is a really great premise for a story! What will Mr. Weston do?
Skyrockets
2006-10-12
ch 3,
abuseOnce again, it was great. It's just too bad it wasn't a little longer, but hey, whatever. “You say that now, but in one month’s time – I’ll find you shriveled up and keeled over your desk with your hand down your pants. A lack of Mr. Weston’s naked body on top of yours with a combination of limp dick will be your demise.” - That was definetly my favorite part. It was the first chuckle of my day!
BrokenDreamz-EmptySoulz
2006-09-30
ch 2,
abuseHehe. I think this is the part where the Desperation Agency comes in. ^.^
Gaki Toki
2006-09-30
ch 2,
abuseHaha, I like it, and that's actually saying something for me, I'm not much into getting into new stories right now, I'm too much of an old hag on this site, I just read whatever I already have, I don't like to add more, but I have to for this, I like it, it makes me interested. And I really like Mr. Weston, he sounds a little...playful. Haha, that's what I like...a lot. ^_^ / I'll be sure to come back to this in the future.

Gaki
Skyrockets
2006-09-30
ch 2,
abuseSinful. Delicious. I love it!And that's all I have to say about that...for now.
Abstruse Blue
2006-09-30
ch 2,
abuseThat was unbelievably amusing somehow, I'm looking forward to more. He has a pretty interesting boss...haha And I LOVE the name Patrick (for some strange reason)
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