the mother goose paragraph was my absolute favorite. and the last line was like, WOW. the fairytale is over. (:

that was so cool!i really liked this, it was so creative, well done!

quite charming. i thought it was funny, then changed my mind, it's sad. my english teacher last year told me that fairy tales reflect the morals of a society. ** how that pans out, isn't it? thanks for the thought candy, xan

Most entertaining. I liked how you had the crimes play off of the rhymes. Jack and his triplet brothers, heh. I never noticed there were so many Jacks. Didn't even have to bother with Jack the Giant Killer, though that's a fairy tale.