This touched me very deeply. I know of someone in a simaliar situation. I always make the effort to read her poems. Good job!

Hey, thanks for reviewing one of my poems...means a lot to me. Now, you said you wanted one of yours to be reviewed that wasn't reviewed yet, so that's what I'm doing. I do like this, but it feels a little cliche-y to me. Especially, the end as it gets into crying parents, etc. If I were you, I would try to re-word the end so it sounds more genuine.