Few minor spelling mistakes, but good.

You know how to get the reader's attention.

Humor will be back next chapter, right?

I look forward to Chapter 3.

HEY! don't blame your messed up grammer on moi! hmpf! hehe! put up the next one! i already know what happens but... STILL!

Interesting first chapter! I wonder why it's called the deja vu cafe.

looks like it'll be good.

update soon!

This story is pretty interesting, not much I can say here except proof-read your work before you post them. It will make your stories better and people will also review your stories better. As for me, I can't give a flame to anybody, but this wasn't a story that deserves to be flame, good overall story, I'll be waiting for future stories.

Saint- aka Prodigy

hehe! ILA RULEZ YOU ALL!

Hm... Interesting story. “I know, I mean look at all the people standing out there,” Nina pointed towards the door, “and none of them are coming in.”-nice line. The characters are very interesting.

If you get the chance, read my story: Angel's Halo 1: Devil's Rising, and drop a review. Much appreciated.

See ya!

aka Mitternacht