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Solemn Coyote 2006-10-08 . chapter 1
"little bits of wind." Nice concept. I kinda like the idea of the weather being divisible. Aside from that, this poem pretty much fulfills the goal of a haiku: it captures a sensation and delivers it to the reader.
brokendreams21 2006-10-03 . chapter 1
I wish I could post haikus. I would totally wish to post an entire collection but I'd get lazy.

Anyways, wow. I really like the wintery theme in the haiku. However, the period in the second line I don't like. Just a preference thing. (Maybe a comma instead? Punctuation has never been my thing.) Still, beautifully written. Great job!
Magnolian Wolf 2006-10-03 . chapter 1
Very nice! Haiku's are often very hard for me because they have to capture a season, and certain sylable count. As far as I can see, you did all correctly. You did a very good job, I had a mental image in my head of the storm.
Sakura Taking 2006-10-02 . chapter 1
Nicely described. Keep it up!
Basara 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
I remember the past storm that hit our country...man it ANNOYED me MUCH! then the news said that there's an another storm hitting our country this monday! T.T

nice...
softlycryingrain 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
Nice haiku, its a lovely little snapshot of description.
Guardrail 2006-09-27 . chapter 1
Nice imagry, I liked this a lot. Great work and write more.
hateandkill-D 2006-09-27 . chapter 1
Cool. I really like this! Great job!
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