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Reviews For: The Blossom and Other Poems

cmetalangel249
2007-07-16
ch 1,
I like how this makes me feel disconnected from everything happening, like I'm watching it from outside my body. Love it.
Nails For Your Crucifix
2006-09-29
ch 1,
I really like the Zen part of the poem, and the overall buddhist feeling with the correct capitalization.

But yes, I really like the Zen part of the poem.. Wonderful thing to remember
Lyra Alluse
2006-09-27
ch 1,
I really like this collection of poems. It's very good! The imagery you used in each one is outstanding. Keep up the good work!

Also, thank you for the in-depth review of my peice. To answer your question, the poem was actually about taking a hike in the woods. It was about the things you experience in all senses as you hike up the trail.

It it also a metaphor for life; the uphill battle one has to face to reach their own personal heaven. Once they reach the top, they realize that deah is eternal and they have forever to do it all over again. ^_^

That was really what I was trying to say in my poem, but it is highly interpretive and people will take it as they want to.

I liked your work! I think i'll add you to my favorite author list. Keep up the good work with everything.
Anaare
2006-09-27
ch 1,
A beautiful collection of poems, which I have truly enjoyed reading. My favorite would have to be "The Question (and the Anwer??)".

Gorgeous imagery, good wording and interesting concepts. So, well done and keep writing!
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