|Reviews for Clocks: A Sonnet|
| teh tarik 10/27/06 . chapter 1
you have a lovely choice of words. i especially like the optimism of the whole piece. keep writing -
| S. K. Doyle 9/27/06 . chapter 1
I really like this. There are a lot of vivid images, but nothing seems unneccesary which is important. I like this: "Go rebuild castles markedly higher" a beautiful image of hope.
Is it just me, or does nobody with any talent write on these things? I really mean it. Yours is the only one I've seen in almost a year that is really poetic by it's nature. Everyone else is super forced. It's either 'vampires' this or 'angst' that, everything cliche and uninspired. Long story short: yours is not. Good job.