I really like the phrases "night's soft cradle" and "time's soft pageant." They do feel soft, and it makes this poem feel like a lullaby of sorts. The rhyme was nicely done, and with the tone of the poem, it was very appropriate. Keep writing! :)

PS. Thanks for your review of my poem!

It was a cute poem, but the rhythm seems to conflict with the tone. The rhythm makes it sound cutesy even though the words are dark. I really do love the content though, kinda makes you think.