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| Anaare 2006-10-10 ch 1,  | abuseDali is the word (or name?...) here. A wonderfully surreal and vivid poem, that seems to jump off the screen and coil around it. Excellent! |
| Elenive 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI love it. Alice in Wonderland always captivated me. Salvador Dali is one of my favorite artists. This poem does a great job of capturing his taste for the unreal. |
| Halcyon Impulsion 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseSurreal poetry at it's best. I might hyphenate white-rabitting... but this is a fun, sweet ride, careening into "what if". Great work. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-09-28 ch 1, | abuseMarvelously vivid references. Very Dali, seemingly random splashes of vividry that wrap around to connect everything together. Truly unique. The subject becomes visable and tangible with the crispness of the images. Excellent work. |
| Crossing the Rubicon 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseThis has such strong imagery, and I love: "some coiled snake struck the clockand scared ten minutes off its life,leaving me with only a serpentine shellof what might have been." |