Dali is the word (or name?...) here. A wonderfully surreal and vivid poem, that seems to jump off the screen and coil around it. Excellent!

I love it. Alice in Wonderland always captivated me.

Salvador Dali is one of my favorite artists. This poem does a great job of capturing his taste for the unreal.

Surreal poetry at it's best. I might hyphenate white-rabitting... but this is a fun, sweet ride, careening into "what if". Great work.

Marvelously vivid references. Very Dali, seemingly random splashes of vividry that wrap around to connect everything together. Truly unique. The subject becomes visable and tangible with the crispness of the images. Excellent work.

This has such strong imagery, and I love: "some coiled snake struck the clockand scared ten minutes off its life,leaving me with only a serpentine shellof what might have been."