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Reviews For: Twins

elisefey 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abuseWell that was intense. The opening scene was great for tension and action. I think that you could really build this into something longer, get into the mood and tone and stretch it just by slowing down a little and adding more sensory detail. It's got the potential for so many interesting probes into human relationships; I like the idea!
Equilibrium 2007-12-13 ch 1,	abuseA beautiful oneshot. I really enjoyed it, especially the way you wrote such that there were no complete distinctions between the good and evil in human character. Your characters are very realistic and believable.
Wolf's Night 2007-07-25 ch 1,	abuseIs this just a short story or are you adding more chapters because it sounds very interesting if you were tocontinue wih it! I was expecting the two young twins to be the evil-good pair but the husband haveing a twin was a nice twist.
Captain Lucky 2007-05-11 ch 1,	abuseThis was a very interesting story. It was intriguing (sp?) and your power with words is amazing. It gives me a lot to contemplate. By the way, I wanted to thank you for reviewing. It was really encouraging to know that someone was actually reading my stuff. CL
Lady Robin 2007-05-09 ch 1,	abuseNice. and thanks for the reviews. I wouldn't have changed crickets name at all except my friend made me and I'll try to watch my spelling. =^.^= yours is way better by the way! P.S. My friend and editor, the one the name Cricket origanly belonged to, Her name is Mel.