 teppygirl 2009-02-21 . chapter 1Really interesting story and I liked the ending, even if it was a bit ominous. It would be good if you could extend this, it's an interesting idea to explore. |
 elisefey 2008-04-25 . chapter 1Well that was intense. The opening scene was great for tension and action. I think that you could really build this into something longer, get into the mood and tone and stretch it just by slowing down a little and adding more sensory detail. It's got the potential for so many interesting probes into human relationships; I like the idea! |
 Equilibrium 2007-12-13 . chapter 1A beautiful oneshot. I really enjoyed it, especially the way you wrote such that there were no complete distinctions between the good and evil in human character. Your characters are very realistic and believable. |
 Wolf's Night 2007-07-25 . chapter 1Is this just a short story or are you adding more chapters because it sounds very interesting if you were tocontinue wih it! I was expecting the two young twins to be the evil-good pair but the husband haveing a twin was a nice twist. |
 Captain Lucky 2007-05-11 . chapter 1This was a very interesting story. It was intriguing (sp?) and your power with words is amazing. It gives me a lot to contemplate.
By the way, I wanted to thank you for reviewing. It was really encouraging to know that someone was actually reading my stuff.
CL |
 Lady Robin 2007-05-09 . chapter 1Nice. and thanks for the reviews. I wouldn't have changed crickets name at all except my friend made me and I'll try to watch my spelling. =^.^= yours is way better by the way!
P.S. My friend and editor, the one the name Cricket origanly belonged to, Her name is Mel. |