"So they’ve given you a baited hook,that don’t mean you should bite."

(this part really hit me!) an important theme in today's world. you are so right! i would love to hear youre input on my story its about perfect relationships and if there really are any. nice work!

Amazing, I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

What a beautiful gift for your friend. Apart from good advice it is well written. There are some young people that are struggling with a need to belong and so are flirting with becoming members of gangs. I would like to show them this poem, if I may.