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| Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 ch 10,  | abuseInteresting addition. Nice cliffhanger. Have a brilliant day and an amazing summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Yusuf 2008-06-02 ch 10, | abuseKaine used to be human? I thought he was a Pure Blood. Title suggestion: It Begins |
| Yusuf 2008-04-27 ch 9, | abuseCan't wait for the next chapters coming up. So, he plans to take Lean up with him, eh? lol. ~Yusuf Zain |
| Dragonfire411 2008-04-26 ch 9, | abuseNice story you have here. I posted one myself. Hope you continue with your writings. |
| Yusuf 2008-04-20 ch 6, | abuseThis chapter was a little bit calmed. For the previous ones, I was sitting at the edge of my seat. ~Yusuf Zain |
| Yusuf 2008-04-20 ch 5, | abuseI do love it so far. For me, it's turning into one of those things, where I try to guess what's going to happen in the future. I'm thinking Fox would turn out to be evil, and get in between Kiane & Mariea. ~Yusuf Zain P.S.: I know you wrote that you already have an editor, but I still see some typos. If you let me, I'd love to help. |
| Yusuf 2008-04-20 ch 4, | abuseThis feels like one of those things, in which you know something big is going to happen, and you just can't wait for it. Haven't been this excited since I watched "Fate Stay Night." Looking forward to reading further whence I get back. ~Yusuf Zain |
| Yusuf 2008-04-20 ch 3, | abuseGetting even more interesting. Sensing trouble from Lean, protectiveness from Kaine towards Mariea. And Zen holding back because he knows and/or feels something. I don't usually read this genre, but I like this one. ~Yusuf Zain |
| Yusuf 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abuseSounds interesting. I like this approach of the existence of vampires. Also, 'Zen' has the same name as I do, 'Zain' (but pronounced 'Zen'). ~Yusuf Zain |
| Twilight Starr 2008-04-18 ch 9, | abuseHis concern for her was cute. The over protectiveness can be annoying after a while. I'm sure she'll probably feel that way. Have a great day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-02-07 ch 8, | abuseInteresting addition. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-08 ch 7, | abuseNice job on foreshadowing clues. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-08 ch 6, | abuseIt's such a sweet chapter. ^^ ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-08 ch 5, | abuseInteresting story. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-08 ch 4, | abuseNice cliffhanger. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |