Interesting addition. Nice cliffhanger. Have a brilliant day and an amazing summer.

~Twilight Starr~

Kaine used to be human? I thought he was a Pure Blood.

Title suggestion: It Begins

Can't wait for the next chapters coming up. So, he plans to take Lean up with him, eh? lol.

~Yusuf
Zain

Nice story you have here. I posted one myself. Hope you continue with your writings.

This chapter was a little bit calmed. For the previous ones, I was sitting at the edge of my seat.

~Yusuf
Zain

I do love it so far. For me, it's turning into one of those things, where I try to guess what's going to happen in the future. I'm thinking Fox would turn out to be evil, and get in between Kiane & Mariea.

~Yusuf
Zain

P.S.: I know you wrote that you already have an editor, but I still see some typos. If you let me, I'd love to help.

This feels like one of those things, in which you know something big is going to happen, and you just can't wait for it. Haven't been this excited since I watched "Fate Stay Night." Looking forward to reading further whence I get back.

~Yusuf
Zain

Getting even more interesting. Sensing trouble from Lean, protectiveness from Kaine towards Mariea. And Zen holding back because he knows and/or feels something.

I don't usually read this genre, but I like this one.

~Yusuf
Zain

Sounds interesting. I like this approach of the existence of vampires.

Also, 'Zen' has the same name as I do, 'Zain' (but pronounced 'Zen').

~Yusuf
Zain

His concern for her was cute. The over protectiveness can be annoying after a while. I'm sure she'll probably feel that way. Have a great day.

~Twilight Starr~

Interesting addition. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

Nice job on foreshadowing clues.

~Twilight Starr~

It's such a sweet chapter. ^^

~Twilight Starr~

Interesting story.

~Twilight Starr~

Nice cliffhanger. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~