 Marie Ellen 2009-03-08 . chapter 1yes--you got the most out of your 26 words. you got a whole mythology out of them; you got a phoenix. it's simple and lovely. well done! |
 lackluster 2006-09-30 . chapter 1i like the fact that it's a hopeful poem and yet the subject is dark, for a lack of a better word. |
 mapofyourhead 2006-09-27 . chapter 1I like it~ the burning motif, and the way you styled the last two lines.
Bravo. |
 Crossing the Rubicon 2006-09-27 . chapter 1This is beautiful, and I love the title for it. "because there's nothing elseyoucan do to me" is just so defiant and perfect. |