Reviews for Telling A Lie - FictionPress.com

sicklysnowwhite 2007-01-14 ch 1,	abusei think you've gone a little too fr with the "keep it simple, stupid" phrase. its too short. too simple, hardly has a point and hardly illustrates it. at least you get the feeling of emmbarasment out.
Mr. Magic 2006-12-29 ch 1,	abusehaha! Loved it! i love all of your poems/stories. they're really good! Keep writing more! Try to write, a poem every day. Please...?
Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-18 ch 1,	abuseHm. Interesting poem you got there.
Royal Bliss 2006-10-22 ch 1,	abuseI was reading through most of what you posted and decided to review this one. It's cute, even though it's pretty basic. You could probably lengthen it somehow to get a type of rhyme sceme in there. But it's fine how it is otherwise. Nice work nonetheless.
Samana 2006-10-04 ch 1,	abuseweird, not really a poem, but i like it, oh and the object in me against myself is hidden so anyone can aply thier own personal additions to the poem, whatever that may be, i do like this though
Princess-anna57 2006-09-30 ch 1,	abuseSimple yet effective. Well described. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^
Keito123 2006-09-27 ch 1,	abuseuhuh... that was interesting... w/e. ~keito~
Orual 2006-09-27 ch 1,	abuseYeah, that's pretty much what a liar looks like. It's good to know the signs. Nice job.
Guardrail 2006-09-27 ch 1,	abuseNice. I like how you've accurately described this. Great work and keep writing. Also, thanks for your very kind reviews.