|Reviews for Ripe|
| thursdays and rain 4/16/07 . chapter 1
cute and funny
| Hazeleyed Everglades 12/28/06 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness.
That was highly amusing.
Very, very, cute.
And original- and I loved how the MC could be just about anyone from a small girl to a middle-aged woman.
Again- very amusing. I really liked it! _
| Banshee Junior 11/20/06 . chapter 1
Goodness, this is so...naughty!
I almost feel like the guy being admonished here (achievement: considering I'm a girl...) but I love how you manage to keep this so playful, even with the heavy sexual imagery running through. My personal favourite is the last line: "...they'll get burned, and run to their mommies, screaming.")
(off to read more!)
| Chemically Induced 10/7/06 . chapter 1
this poem is wild, so full of the strangest sexual trickery and description. i think i understand what it is about; it's pretty funny. :p "i dont wear hats/ of many colors," that as my favorite part. thx for the favoritism. :)
| bipedalcooney 9/30/06 . chapter 1
This is wonderfully and cleverly written. It's quite different. Great work and definatley keep writing.
| in theory 9/30/06 . chapter 1
Sexy title. The last stanza was half-brilliant, half-weird for me. I'll wear my peach slice with pride...I liked that lots "furry hat" ..that's so vulgar! (fascinating though, hah, you know how much people can't resist strangelooking things).
| Leaving Here 9/27/06 . chapter 1
| Tambreo 9/27/06 . chapter 1
This is a pretty crazy poem. Crazy as in I don't understand it just yet. It will take a few readings. It seems to have a lot going on in it. The word choice IS just like a magician, though-it blinds you to what's really there.