Reviews for but there was once you

Lady Fingers 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abusei feel who this is about and i don't blame you
Twilight Starr 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abuseSad, but great poem. You really should capitalize your 'i's properly because it can be annoying to read. Capitalizing every new line will also help with formatting to make your poem look better. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~
yo mamma 2006-10-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseayo dis iz wak az
notthecreepyfatguy 2006-10-01 ch 1,	abuseYou have such an amazing stlye. I cant wait to read more of your poems.
hey maria 2006-10-01 ch 1,	abuseYou used repetition wonderfully in this. It's sad, in a good way.
jenniferdaly 2006-09-27 ch 1,	abuseso much story in the few, limited words of a poem, yet it has everything that is irresistible about a poem, like eloquence and hidden meanings and an overwhelming feeling of nostalgia. a work to be proud of.