Nice progression. That is how it goes. The symbol of light and darkness might be a little cliche, but then, maybe it's not. Maybe it's "time honored" at this point. Anyway, I did like the haikus, and haiku is a poetic form that I don't normally care for.

I like this poem, too. :)

I really like this one too. Good job.

good structure, beautifully written - Alyssa

Nicely written, I like this.

Good again, there really isn't much I can say about haikus...you keep the right number of syllables and portray a great message.One thing though, in the third verse you have "Waling in the light" I am assuming that that is a typo and you meant "walking" again?keep up the good work!