Pretty good. A kind of used concept, but you already knew that. I like the last stanza, but it doesn't seem to have enough closure to it.

I really like the questions posed here. So many people just go through their lives choosing whatever comes easiest; they hardly acknowledge their own power of choice. As I read over the middle three stanzas, I get the idea you are makiung allusions. The last one seems to be "The Road Not Taken," but I'm clueless on the others. They just sound familiar. I expect it will bother me for awhile now. Nice job, anyway; I enjoyed this.

I really like this poem too. Stanza two--Phantom reference? Made me happy. :) but that was just one thing out of many I liked.

Very nice. I like this, good job.

Very unique, I like how you used scenarios to show how choice affects those people. Great job :)PS: thank you for the review

Yep, the double edged sword analogy is very powerful in this work. I like how it ties in every stanza - splitting something painfully in two.

the loose rhyming is cool. Normally people just stick to rhymeing or not rhyming. I like the way you use words - it adds an unpredictibility to your work.

The poem was a bit literal, portraying the actual choices people might have to make rather than the consequences of choice. Also, it seems to go in a loop without really any sort of progression. I don't know if it was what you intended or not.

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I like the metaphor used comparing choice to a 'double-edged sword.' That was quite original. On a preference thing, all of the questions were a bit much...but they were effectively used, added to the effect, and made sense. So that's not really much to complain about, is it? I noticed that you have the same first few words starting each line in each stanze. That's smart. Repetition was good. Great job!

I like the repetition of the first stanza at the end. It really ties it all together. Great job!

Thanks for the review!

This is wonderful! You are a true poet. This poem makes me feel something, which I think only few poets can do. May sucess follow you everywere you go.

Very good. The structure has strength, and really brings out what you had to say. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^