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| Femme de Dieu 2006-10-23 ch 1, | Very nice indeed to follow up on Onyx's piece! Sometimes we will pay all for love, but in the end we are left devastated and downtrodden, more often than not. It's the love that's showered freely, the love we DON'T have to pay any price at all for that is the most to be cherished. No strings attached is so much better than having to constantly loosen the pursestrings. Nonetheless, this was a beautiful piece, and in actuality brought Onyx's piece into focus. I shall go back now and review hers... Truly, Tourterlle |
| onyxdragonflyy 2006-09-28 ch 1, | OMG!! You guys are making me cry!! *literal tears..* T^T... T^T... everything about this was beautiful. Any price, eh? Damn I hate how everyline you peirce another part of me. But yet i can't help but to fall in love with the story."too soon becomes a willing sacrifice"*cries* |
| Mienaku 2006-09-28 ch 1, | is good...haha some of these lines sounded familiar...and i just figured out why...they are similar to the ones i wrote in "rose tinted shards"...*snickers* I feel dumb that it took me so long to figure it out... is good tho i esp. like these lines"still we bleed and beg for love to be wrapped in it like hand to glove" |