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| Music by Moonlight 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abusePretty. Btw, could you please review Secrets of Storms by C. Shells? I'd really appreciate it. The link is:- fictionpress. com/ s/ 2356039/ 1/ (Just remove the blanks between the dot and slashes) |
| Rozovian G 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseNice... I got pretty confused about the plural pronouns you used here, but towards the end, it made more sense. Or I just started ignoring it. This was an enjoyable little fic, and I can see a lot of imagery, both for it and in it. Can't find anything directly wrong with it, save for the 'they' matter, which was a little difficult to get into. Nice job, man. |
| Esquirella 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. |
| L. Damarik Laizare 2006-09-28 ch 1, | abuseImpressive. Though I've never slept with my best friend...I've had this feeling before, and I can say... I think you captured it perfectly. Down to each last detail. |