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Music by Moonlight
2007-05-27
ch 1,
abusePretty. Btw, could you please review Secrets of Storms by C. Shells? I'd really appreciate it. The link is:-


fictionpress. com/ s/ 2356039/ 1/
(Just remove the blanks between the dot and slashes)
Rozovian G
2006-09-30
ch 1,
abuseNice... I got pretty confused about the plural pronouns you used here, but towards the end, it made more sense. Or I just started ignoring it. This was an enjoyable little fic, and I can see a lot of imagery, both for it and in it.

Can't find anything directly wrong with it, save for the 'they' matter, which was a little difficult to get into. Nice job, man.
Esquirella
2006-09-29
ch 1,
abuseVery nicely done.
L. Damarik Laizare
2006-09-28
ch 1,
abuseImpressive. Though I've never slept with my best friend...I've had this feeling before, and I can say...

I think you captured it perfectly. Down to each last detail.
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