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| Nova Light 2008-06-11 ch 10,  | abuseI can see a bit of myself in Cassandra. Good write. Keep it up. |
| miss-hyperactive 2007-05-29 ch 9, | abusei'm a little behind... i liked it, a little backstory is always good. it gave more to understand it that makes any sence? |
| R.F.Y. 2007-04-14 ch 9, | abusewow, poor casey, she really has a messed up past. I WILL POUND THE CRAP OUT OF CHARLIE! GR... :) |
| Jukebox 2007-04-14 ch 9, | abuseIt's really nice to see an original character for once. I can't wait to see how this story plays out. |
| cheesecake.thief 2007-04-14 ch 9, | abuse*Smirk* I can't WAIT to see how this turns out... |
| miss-hyperactive 2007-03-14 ch 8, | abusei really liked the change of point of view, good job. |
| miss-hyperactive 2007-02-26 ch 7, | abuseI enjoyed this. A curve ball is exactly what the story needed, i'm sure the next chapter will be great. |
| miss-hyperactive 2007-01-29 ch 6, | abuseyou have very smooth writing skills. i enjoyed reading this chapter. there were some mistakes. but its understandable. i'm hoping that we'll learn a little bit more about Davey in the next one. |
| kaorichann 2007-01-21 ch 4, | abuseThat's it? I so totally wanted to keep reading! I wanted to find out what happens on their next date! Oh, btw, I remember reading a book similar to this. I'm not saying your idea isn't original, but you might like this author. She writes young adult fiction and romance. Her name is Sarah Dessen and the book is This Lullaby. Maybe you can get some ideas from her. I certainly did! ~Katie |
| miss-hyperactive 2006-11-02 ch 4, | abuseberry good. berry good indeed. |
| give me back my childhood 2006-10-31 ch 4, | abusehaha this is so funny! I can't imagine myself laughing at a.. **. (sort of) haha but it had me in stitches! actually, I think I was a little high or something. :D hmm I don't know the guy's name, but he seems sweet. (: he likes her inner self right? :D so cute. |
| behind these tears 2006-10-31 ch 4, | abuseLMAO! Didn't he say he has work Saturday? lol what a lying scum. But i guess I wouldn't blame him for blowing up on her the first time they met. But you didn't mention the girl's name. Or did you mention it? I forgot sorry. lol Please update really soon. This story is really good. |
| miss-hyperactive 2006-10-25 ch 3, | abusenot bad not bad at all. looking forward to reading more. it shall be interesting. |
| miss-hyperactive 2006-10-10 ch 2, | abusevery good. i think i'm right. |
| miss-hyperactive 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseshe's going to fall in love with him isn't she. |