I love how she slowly is falling for him, and how her past slowly starts coming out in the open :D Update plz :)

Amazing...this story is incredible

I can see a bit of myself in Cassandra. Good write. Keep it up.

i'm a little behind...

i liked it, a little backstory is always good. it gave more to understand it that makes any sence?

wow, poor casey, she really has a messed up past. I WILL POUND THE CRAP OUT OF CHARLIE! GR...
:)

It's really nice to see an original character for once. I can't wait to see how this story plays out.

*Smirk* I can't WAIT to see how this turns out...

i really liked the change of point of view, good job.

I enjoyed this.
A curve ball is exactly what the story needed, i'm sure the next chapter will be great.

you have very smooth writing skills.
i enjoyed reading this chapter.
there were some mistakes. but its understandable.
i'm hoping that we'll learn a little bit more about Davey in the next one.

That's it? I so totally wanted to keep reading! I wanted to find out what happens on their next date! Oh, btw, I remember reading a book similar to this. I'm not saying your idea isn't original, but you might like this author. She writes young adult fiction and romance. Her name is Sarah Dessen and the book is This Lullaby. Maybe you can get some ideas from her. I certainly did!

~Katie

berry good. berry good indeed.

haha this is so funny! I can't imagine myself laughing at a.. **. (sort of) haha but it had me in stitches! actually, I think I was a little high or something. :D hmm I don't know the guy's name, but he seems sweet. (: he likes her inner self right? :D so cute.

LMAO! Didn't he say he has work Saturday? lol what a lying scum. But i guess I wouldn't blame him for blowing up on her the first time they met. But you didn't mention the girl's name. Or did you mention it? I forgot sorry. lol Please update really soon. This story is really good.

not bad not bad at all. looking forward to reading more. it shall be interesting.