Hmm... I do think you should tell her... I mean, if you dont, and she finds out you knew, she'll blame it on you and you'll be the bad guy.

Dark and emotional. Well written, I like it. Great work and write more.

i can kind of see what you are getting at...wow. very...sad. it's kind of like a what you used to be like...to what you have turned into. i really like this..great job.i have a poem...that is a before and after poem..tragedy, i hate it

but the poem is untitled...so check it out sometime

:D

The words in this poem are inelaborate, but it's expressive enough. I don't think anyone will have any trouble understanding the point you are trying to convey.