Reviews for the great beyond - FictionPress.com

lackluster 2006-10-02 ch 1,	abusei like how you play with words. it's a meaningful poem, and i love it, really.
dress her up in fairytales 2006-09-28 ch 1,	abuse"because I am slowly/suffocating -/bleeding myself dry/a thousand times over./crusted blood on marble/lips and still I cannot scream." hm, i love those lines. they're powerful and the rest of the piece is amazing. i've been feeling lost too, lately, so know that you aren't alone.
Golden Holly 2006-09-28 ch 1,	abuseWow. I loved it, I really did. I can identify with this as well, having had something similar to me happen in the past.Beautiful!