Reviews for Fly beyond the sun

truefire
2006-11-19
ch 1,

FUN! i like it

HermitInMyOwnHead
2006-11-17
ch 1,

i like those underlined italicized words. i assume they're talking about the also underlined italicized word "joyous" but they apply to jesus too, so i like them even more. hm, wow, did i tell you how much i love your penname? yeah, i did, but i...do. huh, i'm kinda hyper--it's friday, you know?

anyway, that was a random, unrelated string of thoughts there... uh...awkward...

well, keep up writing poetry. you really are very good at it. never would have suspected you write it, but that's being judgemental. i'm sorry. but really, you write beautiful poems. looking forward to more.

have an awesomeful weekend! ;)

oh, btw, i was thinking, i talk in these reviews like you're my best friend and when i see you in at school i usually don't say hi. that's because i'm more confident in the written word: i don't want you to think i'm being snobby or whatever. if you ever even thought about that.

i'm talking much more than i need to now. 'bye. :)

*awkward exit*

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