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| The Ferrett 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseSorry, tried but I'm not a short stories person - short chapters yes, stories no. I like meat with my bones - good luck on this one though. |
| Mr.Satire 2006-12-18 ch 4, | abuseWow! Creepy story! I read this at about 1:00 AM, and that kind of creeped me out. I did not expect the figures to be cat-like, though; I was expecting zombies. I really like two particular parts of this story. 1) I love when Kristen sings that song to herself! "Yo, tell me what ya want, what ya really really want... zigga-zig-ah!" Nice touch! 2) The ending line was great! "What happened? Is anybody out there? Is anybody... human?" Eerie! |
| The Ferrett 2006-11-22 ch 3, | abusethis collection iks totally wacko... i like ::)) |
| Mr.Satire 2006-11-05 ch 3, | abuseOops! I had still not added a review to this one. Well, thinking about it again, I should have listened to you and read it at night. However, it is was still a well-planned story. I liked the question of whether what happened was a dream or not (because of Randy's ceasing to stutter)! Not wanting to steal a comment from a friend's review, my overall analysis will be that it is very 'creepily disturbing'! |
| scotti 2006-10-26 ch 3, | abuseOk, this was... and is... just disturblingly creepy. I suppose it fits right in with the current 'holiday' as you said. Creepy,I tell you...CREEPY! ~Scottie |