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Reviews For: The Conditions Project

The Ferrett
2007-01-04
ch 1,
abuseSorry, tried but I'm not a short stories person - short chapters yes, stories no. I like meat with my bones - good luck on this one though.
Mr.Satire
2006-12-18
ch 4,
abuseWow! Creepy story! I read this at about 1:00 AM, and that kind of creeped me out. I did not expect the figures to be cat-like, though; I was expecting zombies. I really like two particular parts of this story.

1) I love when Kristen sings that song to herself! "Yo, tell me what ya want, what ya really really want... zigga-zig-ah!" Nice touch!

2) The ending line was great! "What happened? Is anybody out there? Is anybody... human?" Eerie!
The Ferrett
2006-11-22
ch 3,
abusethis collection iks totally wacko... i like ::))
Mr.Satire
2006-11-05
ch 3,
abuseOops! I had still not added a review to this one. Well, thinking about it again, I should have listened to you and read it at night. However, it is was still a well-planned story. I liked the question of whether what happened was a dream or not (because of Randy's ceasing to stutter)!

Not wanting to steal a comment from a friend's review, my overall analysis will be that it is very 'creepily disturbing'!
scotti
2006-10-26
ch 3,
abuseOk, this was... and is... just disturblingly creepy. I suppose it fits right in with the current 'holiday' as you said. Creepy,I tell you...CREEPY! ~Scottie
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