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| Marinus 2007-09-27 ch 1, | This is a cold poem, very cold and desolate, really. I really, really loved the Gentleman Death verse - perhaps you could do a poem about him? |
| A. J. Krautwurst 2006-09-29 ch 1, | rather bleak. i liked 'gentleman death.' it's a fresh way to use a stale image. the the abac rhyme scheme reminds me of the poems i used to write. my style has changed since then, but it used to be the only form i used. |