The two last paragraphs are AMAZING! I liked the whole poem, but when I got to the end... it amazed me. Great writing!

That was an awesome poem! I could feel your pain in every line and anyone can tell that you obviously care alot about what you write.

very well done. I can definatly relate. I never thought about that, you're title was a difinate eye catcher, that sometimes is the best part of the poem, about how the title wrapped the poem up in one simple line.

Wow. Very good. It has such a great message in it. I really love this poem, especially the beginning. Great job!

Powerful message, very touching. Awesome job. Write on and thanks for the kind review. God Bless ya.

wow. you talented. i LOVE LOVE LOVE how you write... perfect.

i love the message in this.. i love the idea in the beginning (how you start you poem)..

its amazing.

liz

ps. adding you to fa authors