I'm reading some more of your stuff and I see I can relate to a lot of it. This poem, for instance. Those few verses say A LOT, for sure. Really beautiful.

I really liked this one, I can relate to it very easily. My favorite line was "Still dreams about her nightmares." I don't know why, but that just seemed to stand out in my mind. Very good.

I liked it very deep and meaningful. Great job, and thx for the review

Amazing poem! I really, really like it! Great rhyming! Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

Great poem sometimes the shorter ones are the most meaningful.

I really liked the ending Great job:

The girl who thought she was your friendStill dreams about her nightmaresEmbracing at the end.

thanks for the review and thanks for adding my poem to your favourites

Keep Writing!

You should really metre this, because the first few lines of both stanzas read like they are, and the different sylable counts in the last lines really mess up the rhythm.

About my earlier review: I was not offended, just remarking. Lolimh. I totally appreciate the difference (I'm actually bi, and have a thing for earthy brunettes, so I can't be)

Anyway, keep on writing. I might have criticisms of your work now, but if you keep at it, I'm sure you'll get quite good at it!

Wow, you're poem made me feel sad. But I'm gald I got to read a good poem though

This is a wonderful poem, and it just made me feel so sad...

But it was written very well. These could almost be lyrics!

Great write!

♥ Alice

That was great. Very heartfelt. I liked it alot. Thanks for reviewing my poem!Modelicous

wow... i love it. tells of a great story.

keep writing..liz