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bittersweet.season 2006-10-28 . chapter 1
i found you on the the fave list of someone else, and i'm glad, too.
this was very provactive and beuatiful.
you make me want to hide my poetry in a dark corner.
poetic abortion 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
"You don't think of boys as rape victims."

And, yes, I love this poem and I just can't get over how gorgeous and right-wrong this feels.

It's beautiful.

~* Noelle
unspecified 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
good point, but it IS more likely for a girl to be raped then a guy...but it does happen, and it is often overlooked.

great jobbekah:D
BrokenandBeautiful 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
Interesting point of view. I love it! good job!
in a jar pk 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
gorgeous imagery, love. xx
C Colucy 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
Great imagery, sad story.

Could be a formatting issue on this site but 'girl-shaped' and 'zipper-seeking' should be hyphenated. And the last line seems out of the blue.

Keep writing!C
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