 bittersweet.season 2006-10-28 . chapter 1i found you on the the fave list of someone else, and i'm glad, too.
this was very provactive and beuatiful.
you make me want to hide my poetry in a dark corner. |
 poetic abortion 2006-09-29 . chapter 1"You don't think of boys as rape victims."
And, yes, I love this poem and I just can't get over how gorgeous and right-wrong this feels.
It's beautiful.
~* Noelle |
 unspecified 2006-09-29 . chapter 1good point, but it IS more likely for a girl to be raped then a guy...but it does happen, and it is often overlooked.
great jobbekah:D |
 BrokenandBeautiful 2006-09-29 . chapter 1Interesting point of view. I love it! good job! |
 in a jar pk 2006-09-29 . chapter 1gorgeous imagery, love. xx |
 C Colucy 2006-09-29 . chapter 1Great imagery, sad story.
Could be a formatting issue on this site but 'girl-shaped' and 'zipper-seeking' should be hyphenated. And the last line seems out of the blue.
Keep writing!C |