| Reviews for Twenty Things I Didn't Know About You |
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Kelsey Hurley 4/21/07 . chapter 12 I don't care what you do, I WANT MY HAPPY ENDING! Wait, no. Make me marry Jeff Hardy. And I'll be your best friend? :D |
whodoyaTHINK 1/7/07 . chapter 9 WHY IS THERE NO KAY CHAPTER IN THIS? *gasp* next chapter better have me in it! I HATE EJ!:) yay. |
Sajas82 1/6/07 . chapter 8You should have gone with my ideas. Hahahahaha! Just kidding. Hurry up and write the next chapter! I get to find out her secret! You're all jealous. |
guess 12/24/06 . chapter 6 i've decided im not going to update People Change UNTIL you update THIS. AHH! i want LUKE! kay. kay. bye. MERRY CHRISTMAS:) -kelsey & the cuzins:) |
Meloy 11/6/06 . chapter 6hello, really good chapter this. I like the whole scenes with shania and trip. very well done. I think that the part when Kay is crying into the phone is a bit difficult to imagine, might just be because of the stuttering in it, it makes it harder for me to read smoothly and imagine her saying. Really good job though. -meloy ps, thank you for reviewing my story :) |
Pablo the Incredible 10/23/06 . chapter 6chap.6 came out great sara, keep up the good authoring (is that even a word?) :P |
Meloy 10/9/06 . chapter 5oh, they're agents? wicked. i like 'yeh, what's with the leather?' lol. brill. do you think you could review my story? I'll keep checking back here for updates... cool story. :)-meloy |
Meloy 10/9/06 . chapter 4ahh! what's shania up to with that leather? blood on the wall? ek! love this story.-meloy |
Meloy 10/9/06 . chapter 3wait... which one are you? this is really good. I like the characters. very interesting. poor shania! that jerk coming in and spoilling all her fun! keep writing! i keep reading. :) |
Meloy 10/9/06 . chapter 2i like this chapter too! i like how they're just standing around and thinking about how the other people look now. very cool. The only problem I think is you need to express their emotions more than just them talking, in the last chapter they were very emotional but in this one they seem to have lost them! lol. very very good.-meloy |
Meloy 10/9/06 . chapter 1cool, I like it a lot. :) the only problems I can really see is in the end she says accenctuates 'every hip' which sounds a bit odd considering you only have two, you might just want to say 'her hips'. I really like it though, the characters are very nice. I think that the kid is well written, I like how you say she uses her tallents mainly for the forces of evil. Very funny. like me when i was little. lol. Well done! I will read the other chapters too.-Meloy |
Captain Kelsey 10/8/06 . chapter 5the agent thing is a bit...erm, other than that, its WIICKEDD good:] |
Sarah 10/7/06 . chapter 5 Wicked GOOD! YOu didn't really ruin it for me when you said those random words. You have got to keep writing this. What's up with the whole Agent thing? |
colorful 10/7/06 . chapter 4Creepy! Update soon. BRING ME IN, DAMMIT! :) very creepy. I'm sorta confsued, tho, so I"m going to go back and read all of the other chapters. |
Captain Kelsey 10/6/06 . chapter 3KIDS!and i cant believe I'm dancing with PHIL *cough* , i cant wait!wish it was .:)keep writing, foo. |