may i ask who is staring at her like that, another girl?

Truly a poem we are incapable of putting words to descibe. Good job! :)

first stanza caught me so offguard...i'm going to have to red more of your work. xx

haha and yes, using big words is great...but even greater, still, are the faces of people when they don't get it. XD like, they know they're being insulted, but they don't understand. lol. xx