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| Thread of Life 2008-07-16 ch 25,  | abuseI think this story is freaking AWESOME. I love it. It's dark, and fantastic in general. I love how you have so many potential directions with this story, with Hespet, the Slayers, his mother who will surely come home eventually, and the fact that everyone in this story are murderers makes it interesting. I love Simon, but at the same time I'm afraid he's going to eat someone important to Lionel. So um, great job for a wonderful story. I just found it a few days ago and I am so glad I did. |
| Thread of Life 2008-07-16 ch 8, | abuseI loved this chapter because it was such a turning point and because it was so dramatic! It was surprising that he bit him, and that Simon saved his life. I like Simon a lot, he's one of my favorites. And I felt bad for Morden because he seemed so sorry. Great chapter. |
| Thread of Life 2008-07-16 ch 4, | abuseI've already read the story as far as I can, but I am going back to leave a review for this chapter specifically because it really stood out for me. This chapter was amazing. Oh god you are like a master of suspense here. Very creepy and intense. Simon is so crepy! Anyways, I love it. |
| the-raven's-star 2008-07-13 ch 25, | abuseyay u posted... i love simon and i love this story ... yea umm i just wanted to know uh is there really an ice cream flavor that has chicken in it?!? |
| Miss Acid Pops 2008-07-06 ch 25, | abuseI hope it isn't a slayer! D: Update soon please! |
| PencilSketchS 2008-06-23 ch 25, | abusehallo to u 2. i've changed my opinion of Simon since my last review. he's actually really awe inspiring. and Morden's too nice for his own good where Hespat is concerned. Poor Lionel. i'm waiting eagerly for the rest cause so far this story is really interesting. |
| PencilSketchS 2008-06-22 ch 3, | abusei just had to say that Simon is creepy! Lionel beware! i'm loving this so far. |
| PencilSketchS 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abusei was a bit apprehensive when i say this was a horror but it sounded good and i'm happy to say i was pleasantly surprise and put at ease that its not gore and screaming. i totally and thoroughly enjoy ur two main characters. Lionel is awesome! i love his attitude and personality in general. now i just wish Morden's mom doesn't kill him. and Morden's cute and curious. but then i like most characters with fangs. hm, purple eyes. |
| marie ryan 2008-06-06 ch 18, anon. | abuseI typed in free e-books and hunted for a good site. This seems to be one of the better ones out there. |
| marie ryan 2008-06-06 ch 15, anon. | abuseThese are my favorite types of stories. Keep bringing in the characters. I love it! |
| marie ryan 2008-06-06 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love the addition of Simon. He could be a great character in the series. |
| Bjork-rules-the-world 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseHey, loves it! Loves it! I can't wait for more! |
| Limited Edition 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseWahahaha the ending had me laughing. The beginning is a bit dull though. I like the descriptions. Good job. |
| Bloodstained Coat 2008-04-28 ch 9, | abuseOh, I don't know why, but I simply love Simon/Lionel more than Lionel/Morden. Simon's my favorite so far. =] This story is amazing. |
| ChaosMan 2008-04-28 ch 25, | abuseYay, thanks for the update, Robin :) Full on nail-biting excitement as always! turnturnturnTWISTturnturnTWISTturnTWISTturnturnTWIST ;) Keep writing, we gotta know where it GOES! Got some cool skill there |