Reviews for A Shadow Out of Time

Reviews For: A Shadow Out of Time

mamandada 2007-04-21 ch 3,	lead should be led. foreward should be forward, as you pointed out to me once. I can't wait until my mythology class. I think you write better than me. You use a better vocabulary, and you're more descriptive.
Amei666 2007-02-03 ch 9,	Yes! Chapter 9! More complications make it more interesting... usually. but that last part doesn't concern your story So, great work as always!
Mamandadadadadadada 2007-01-30 ch 2,	I got bored with my name, could you tell? Anyway... mater- matter Kinda neat trick with the lightning. Sorry I'm so behind in reading this, but I'll review as I read, okay?
Amei666 2007-01-14 ch 8,	Yay! Another chapter! So, I'm very greatful that you put in the universes when you switched; that would've been confusign without it. Currently, I'm trying to get my friend to read more fictionpress so maybe you'll get more reveiwers ^_^
Amei666 2006-12-27 ch 7,	No matter what universe it is, Terra always seems to be captured in some way... Oh, and I just KNEW that you would have Jar tor Ell and Frin tor An when you said 'The Great One' but... I didn't remember that until now... hm, that sounds totally stupid but hey, I can't erase what I've said... or can I?
Mamandada 2006-12-25 ch 1,	"some packed down my passing "~ Should be by... "motioned to James to be quite and sit " Should be quiet. Anyway... I just read the first chapter 'cuz my mom is like, TV! Nice to be back in this world, a bit, though. Liking Jack as a character, though. Jack and James amused me because it reminded me of Jack and Jill. I'm a freak. And I don't think I've made sense. So... I'm gonna go.
Amei666 2006-12-24 ch 6,	Short chapters are good, and this one's pretty long seeing that it took only a few days for you to put it up. Um, as for reviews... I'd tell friends except for the fact that I only have two friends who don't even reveiw my stuff so... that's that. but, I'm sure soemone else will find this story and reveiw. If not... well, I don't know. Anyway, Merry christmas (again) and... I like the new title.
Amei666 2006-12-23 ch 5,	Heh, shiny armour... yeah, the important guys always get the best stuff. Anyway, good use of point of veiw (Or wahtever it's called). Who would have guessed that both James' would attack each other by mistake? So... another great chapter. It seems like an early Christmas present ot get a new chapter ^_^ Happy holidays!
Amei666 2006-12-17 ch 4,	Now that I've read your 50,0 word novel, I'm confused becuse... even though they have the same name, they aren't the same person... sorta. But, excellent chapter; it does always seem that chasing guards have corssbows, or long-range weapons. Heh, why is that? ^_^ Anyway, great job, I'll be looking foward to more.
Amei666 2006-10-18 ch 3,	Just as great as ever. :)
Amei666 2006-10-02 ch 2,	Just as awesome as before ^_^
Amei666 2006-09-29 ch 1,	O_o Quite interesting. I can't wait for chapter 2...

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