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Reviews For: Dark Sugar

LotR
2007-09-03
ch 7,
abuseI really like your story so far plz update soon
Tryphosa Constance
2006-12-02
ch 6,
abuseI love Snow, I love you, And I love the white stuff...
Mistress of the Tormented
2006-10-08
ch 5,
abuseyou should have killed both of them. no witness'. and you could have made the cop more perverted, make both children join. Nah. just kidding ( i sound crazy dont i?) anyways it was real good cant wait for the next chapter.
Tryphosa Constance
2006-10-07
ch 5,
abuseYou are so welcomed for that gruesome murder scene... I love it.

I love you, I love it!

Keep writing!

Love, Pascy
spydercrystal
2006-10-06
ch 4,
abuseThis sounds like it's going to be a cool story. Please update soon.
cloolesss
2006-10-06
ch 4, anon.
abuseHAHA emy, wtf was that? james is so freaky
clooless
2006-10-05
ch 3,
abuseHEHEY yoyo, how are ya? Nice greusome story you got runnin here. Lol, I really should post soon.
Mistress of the Tormented
2006-10-03
ch 1,
abuseI already told you this story is amazing so to refresh your memory: THIS STORY IS AMAZING
Tryphosa Constance
2006-10-03
ch 3,
abuseHey. Good keep up! The officer part intrigued me.

Love,Moi.
Tryphosa Constance
2006-10-01
ch 2,
abuseEight... O.o

I say you change the rating.. The swears and goryness might bo to much for younglings to read...

Good! Really good love!!

Love,Moi.
Tryphosa Constance
2006-09-29
ch 1,
abuseI know what it's about!

You told me in career choice class... Plus I read the beginning of the second chappy... AWESOMENESS LOVIE!

Keep writing. I know where you live!

Pascy.
pnaibabe
2006-09-29
ch 1, anon.
abusei think that was an awesome story.i actually got it. and i understood it.u have a great sense of writing.and i love ur style.you have this uniqueness.keep it up
holadios
2006-09-29
ch 1,
abuseIts good. It a kind of writing i really havent read before. I like your style of writing. I dont really get it but I'll keep reading if u keep writing!Good job!
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