I really like your story so far plz update soon

I love Snow, I love you, And I love the white stuff...

you should have killed both of them. no witness'. and you could have made the cop more perverted, make both children join. Nah. just kidding ( i sound crazy dont i?) anyways it was real good cant wait for the next chapter.

You are so welcomed for that gruesome murder scene... I love it.

I love you, I love it!

Keep writing!

Love, Pascy

This sounds like it's going to be a cool story. Please update soon.

HAHA emy, wtf was that? james is so freaky

HEHEY yoyo, how are ya? Nice greusome story you got runnin here. Lol, I really should post soon.

I already told you this story is amazing so to refresh your memory: THIS STORY IS AMAZING

Hey. Good keep up! The officer part intrigued me.

Love,Moi.

Eight... O.o

I say you change the rating.. The swears and goryness might bo to much for younglings to read...

Good! Really good love!!

Love,Moi.

I know what it's about!

You told me in career choice class... Plus I read the beginning of the second chappy... AWESOMENESS LOVIE!

Keep writing. I know where you live!

Pascy.

i think that was an awesome story.i actually got it. and i understood it.u have a great sense of writing.and i love ur style.you have this uniqueness.keep it up

Its good. It a kind of writing i really havent read before. I like your style of writing. I dont really get it but I'll keep reading if u keep writing!Good job!