 LotR 2007-09-03 . chapter 7I really like your story so far plz update soon |
 Tryphosa Constance 2006-12-02 . chapter 6I love Snow, I love you, And I love the white stuff... |
 Mistress of the Tormented 2006-10-08 . chapter 5you should have killed both of them. no witness'. and you could have made the cop more perverted, make both children join. Nah. just kidding ( i sound crazy dont i?) anyways it was real good cant wait for the next chapter. |
 Tryphosa Constance 2006-10-07 . chapter 5You are so welcomed for that gruesome murder scene... I love it.
I love you, I love it!
Keep writing!
Love, Pascy |
 spydercrystal 2006-10-06 . chapter 4This sounds like it's going to be a cool story. Please update soon. |
 cloolesss 2006-10-06 . chapter 4 HAHA emy, wtf was that? james is so freaky |
 clooless 2006-10-05 . chapter 3HEHEY yoyo, how are ya? Nice greusome story you got runnin here. Lol, I really should post soon. |
 Mistress of the Tormented 2006-10-03 . chapter 1I already told you this story is amazing so to refresh your memory: THIS STORY IS AMAZING |
 Tryphosa Constance 2006-10-03 . chapter 3Hey. Good keep up! The officer part intrigued me.
Love,Moi. |
 Tryphosa Constance 2006-10-01 . chapter 2Eight... O.o
I say you change the rating.. The swears and goryness might bo to much for younglings to read...
Good! Really good love!!
Love,Moi. |
 Tryphosa Constance 2006-09-29 . chapter 1I know what it's about!
You told me in career choice class... Plus I read the beginning of the second chappy... AWESOMENESS LOVIE!
Keep writing. I know where you live!
Pascy. |
 pnaibabe 2006-09-29 . chapter 1 i think that was an awesome story.i actually got it. and i understood it.u have a great sense of writing.and i love ur style.you have this uniqueness.keep it up |
 holadios 2006-09-29 . chapter 1Its good. It a kind of writing i really havent read before. I like your style of writing. I dont really get it but I'll keep reading if u keep writing!Good job! |