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| simpleplan13 2006-11-19 ch 1,  | abuseI love the format of the last line... great piece |
| Getuie 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI love the openness to this. My favourite line: "It longs to capture me, but My heart Longs to capture you." Awesome stuff. |
| Beautifula 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseYour passion clearly shows in this poem! Awesome stuff! |
| Needa S 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseAmen! Beautiful, excellent write. God Bless and keep writing. |
| HopefulPoet 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Thats all I can say. Your devotion is true and it shows. |