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| simpleplan13 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abuseI love that metaphor... its wonderful |
| Getuie 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseWhat an awesome analogy. I love it when God shows us things that are so simple, but so close and loving and intimate. You've illustrated it perfectly with this poem. It has the exact level of description and the diction is perfect. Nicely done. |
| AuthorNinjaEarth 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseHm, beautiful. I really love that last part, "Lord, I love my bed." 'Take note of the feeling' he replied,' this is what it's like in my arm.'" Excellent work, indeed! |
| KalinaGirl 2006-10-06 ch 1, | abuseAw...that is the cutest thing ever! Thanks for the review babe and did you ever get my email? |
| Beautifula 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI like the feeling of being in his arms then! by the way, thanks for your reviews! |
| godhungry923 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abusethis is, without a doubt, the best poem i've seen all day! completely incredible. you've completed your task as a poet to make your point in a clear view as if your reader was there. kudos! props! bravo! |
| Grumpy 2006-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI must say ya have a way with words. Beautiful write. Ya should come join this site I'm on. We need all the help we can get in spreading the word of God. Ya can post your work there also. Ya can find the link on Needa S profile shes a memeber there too. Whatever ya decide, keep up the awesome work. |
| Needa S 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseSweet! Awesome write. Keep'em coming. God Bless ya. |