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| LadyBlackbird 2006-10-05 ch 1, | Wow. I love the flow and the rhyme scheme. "Behind locked doors/lie words unsaid/promises broken/and tears unshed" That was my favorite part ^.^ The ending was sweet and a bit said and all too true. Keep writing. x. Lady Blackbird .x |
| Gil 3 2006-09-29 ch 1, | I love this poem! It covers everything without having to dive into every subject. It was great! |
| Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 2006-09-29 ch 1, | This poem flows really well. I like it a lot. Behind Locked Doors, I never thought about it but you made a lot of really good points. Again, good work with this. ~*~ Lil Dreamy Eyez ~*~ |
| Kittle 2006-09-29 ch 1, | This is wonderful. I think this poem desribes something that most people have felt in sometime in their lives. :) |