 Frosthold 2009-06-27 . chapter 1Interesting! I wondered throughout, however, how Jack concealed his face. I really think you ought to address this. Other than that, this was really good. Jack's character is really well developed. Great work!
-Frost |
 Tawny Owl 2008-06-17 . chapter 1That was brilliant. I love the way you have portrayed Jack. Kept him creepy and dangerous (the comment in the beginning about what it felt like to be on the other end of his grin springs to mind). He strikes me as being a bit narcissistic as well because he likes the publicity that surrounds him but gets worked up over being seen. You have created a very well rounded character in not a lot of space.
I didn’t find the reporter quite as strong, but she was very convincing as a reporter if that makes sense? I also think the style of the piece helped that. I think because it was factual and observational. It was quite tense as well. I must admit I was expecting a gory ending, but was quite pleased when it didn’t happen.
I was going to try and be constructive as well, but I think I enjoyed it too much. I did get a bit confused around the comment about the ‘Leather Apron’, but I think that may have just been me. |
 Pearls and Formaldehyde 2006-10-29 . chapter 1I love this! I'm doing a report on Mr. Ripper myself. This was a great read! Seriously! I love your talent. Where did you get your info?
P.S.: Do I get TWO cookies? |
 castaways and cutouts 2006-10-02 . chapter 1I like! Maybe you should do a series...interviews with famous people or something of the like...I'd read them!! |
 de wolf 2006-09-30 . chapter 1 i think u could've made it a little longer. but other than that it was really good. u really got Jack the Ripper in one perseption (sp??) |
 the-foresight 2006-09-29 . chapter 1Well you know your stuff that's for sure. It was really interesting, I actually thought he'd say he killed them for the fun of it. It's the only real reason that I could think of. |
 Stale.Cracker 2006-09-29 . chapter 1This was AWESOME! It really made me inspired to start writing that Jack the Ripper story I've been wanting to...please review back!
~Frodo |